自己翻译的第三封情书（中译英）

耳语者

才几天的航行

The sailing only went on for a couple of days


海风所带来的哭声已让我苍老许多

The cryings that sea wind blew over

Made me much older


我不愿离开甲板，也不愿睡觉

I didn't want to leave the deck

nor go to fall sleep


我心里已经做好盘算

I had made up my mind


一旦让我着陆

Once I was landed


我将一辈子不愿再看见大海

I'd never wish to see oceans ever again


海风啊，为何总是带来哭声呢？

Oh, breezes from the sea

why only brought cryings all the time?


爱人哭、嫁人哭、生孩子哭

cryings of people in love

of people getting married

of people giving births...


想着你未来可能的幸福我总是会哭

When thinking of the happiness

you're likely to have in the future

It was something I would always cry for


只是我的泪水

But my tears


总是在涌出前就被海风吹乾

Were dried by sea wind

before they welled up


涌不出泪水的哭泣，让我更苍老了

Weeping without tearing

Made me even older


可恶的风 可恶的月光 可恶的海

The hateful wind

The hateful moonlight

The hateful ocean

  

十二月的海总是带着愤怒

Oceans were always in anger

When it was in December

  

我承受着耻辱和悔恨的臭味

I had to bear the smelly taste

mixed up with humiliation and hate


陪同不安静地晃荡

along with swaying up and down

  

不明白我到底是归乡

After all, I had no idea if I had returned

  

还是离乡！

Or I had just left the hometown

zane

才子,支持耳语~~

zane

不过我在想,这情书送出去是否能起作用~~

68706072

呵呵，欣赏一下耳语的大作

4月20号

可惜我英语不好~~！

瞳中落花

耳朵你怎么能这么有才的...
我太崇拜你了~~~

zane

耳朵你怎么能这么有才的...
我太崇拜你了~~~

哈哈,一看童话就没收到过这种情书吧

瞳中落花

是啥样的都没有...T  T

青蛙♂王子

很像《海角七号》……   耳语大大很厉害呢  

zane

是啥样的都没有...T  T

童话乖哈，不哭~~~