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[思想后街] 给点意见!!!

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发表于 2007-4-27 10:39:55 | 显示全部楼层
know you love is<not for me>,??
your love吧?~~
后面有点乱了啊~~。同意楼上门的意见,再改顺一点。
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-27 12:04:58 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢  大家的意见!!!
发表于 2007-4-27 12:09:51 | 显示全部楼层
我写过一个更长的
但是如大家所说
有些牵强!
汗//////////////////////
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-27 12:11:20 | 显示全部楼层
都支持大家  这么做!
发表于 2007-4-27 13:47:56 | 显示全部楼层
感觉像外国习惯啊    缺少中国味道
发表于 2007-4-28 08:50:55 | 显示全部楼层
i with you...
everything
...
太牵强了
不过鼓励下
发表于 2007-4-28 08:52:47 | 显示全部楼层
好不容易写的,大家多鼓励吧。谁都不是一上来写,就很顺利的。
发表于 2007-4-28 09:00:01 | 显示全部楼层
when you make <the call> to me , tell me you will<get another boyfriend>,i know your love is<not for me>,i cant`t believe that,but you tell that <it`s true>,then i<just want you know> i will love you <more than that>,<yes i will>i with you <10000 promises>,i <crawling back to you>,iwith you <how did i fall in love with you><my beautiful woman>,<all i have to give>i want you everthing,i want tell you i love you <as long as you love me>!!i <never gone>for you!!
我想修改的,改不下去了。
我英语太滥了
不好意思。[s11]
发表于 2007-4-28 09:00:59 | 显示全部楼层
修改的话,是不是需要授权啊?
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-28 12:45:47 | 显示全部楼层
呵呵   大家可以帮我修改一下勒
  THANK YOU  了
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