【原创】March On to the Soul

milanboy

Sitting in the corner
Trembling in the dark
We said we would never be apart
but it seems all over

I'm trying to find a way
to get through this
But I'm lost
I can't find the exit

I'm falling
in the cold dark night
I need you to give me your hand
but you're fading from my sight

love will keep one up all night
so do I

I asked:"will she come back?"
but no one give me answers right

I'm still trembling
Still blaming
I know you're not believing
but i'll keep on trying

Like knocking on every door
but everyone just laughing
"You deserve it, fool" they say
"No one cares about you ‘cuz you did the same way"

in the sky there are fireworks
they are beautiful and disappered
I said nothing
just keep on walking...

I'm trying to find the right way
to get out of the misery
I don't know when I can make it right
Because you're not beside me to be my guide...

Where is the end of the night
of the suffering
I know I hurt you and you're still hurting
Lights flashed by, confused my eyes

I hesitated, but walked by
that's not what I want, I tell myself

No time's left
The night is getting colder
I want to light up a cigarette
to make myself warmer
the wind blows
the fire's out
My brain's blackout
I've never felt so scared

"Keep trying!"
a voice suddenly come out
I moved my legs
though they have been trembling

The dawn maybe never comes
but I won't give up

Devils walking around me
I just pretend I haven't seen
I have faith in myself
and I know I can defeat them

I want to write some words to some one
Someone who will find me dead in the dark
Then I shall close my eyes
In the hell that my soul is sure to go to

I pick up the pen
try to write in the dark
But suddenly I find
I've lost the ability to write

Forget it...
I deserve the death
in the cold dark night
Even if I can't get to the destination
I don't want to stay alive

I've lost the most important thing
Now I gotta find it out
No time to waste
just moving out!

There's still a long way to go
March on to the soul...
March on to the soul....

上个月心情极度低落时写得。。。难免有语法错误。。。大家凑合看吧。。

firstin

很不错呢，挺好的。我英文很差，也看不出语法问题来

milanboy

MARCH ON TO THE SOUL是GC的一句歌词。。呵呵

黑尾巴的猫

呀，我居然都看懂啦！
表扬下自己的英语

可爱的小米

[s:21] 楼上你是英语专业的好不好
这也好意思拿出来说  [s:29]

黑尾巴的猫

[s:29] 不揭穿我你难受么。。。
我的水平基本上每个大学生都能达到，有什么不好意思的。

可爱的小米

不揭穿我你难受么。。。
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[s:29] 这样才能达到互逗的效果阿

OO

写的很不错啊
就是基调太灰暗了
要向前看 向着太阳生气的地方看

lulu.w

不错拉,谁管你语法,其实你表说的太离谱
老外都会懂帝 [s:28]

milanboy

嘿嘿。。其实我也是英语专业的。。。就是语法不咋滴。。。