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所谓脑抽，就是脑袋抽筋，写完这篇作文以后觉得自己所有的脑细胞都快死光了，第一次有种精疲力尽的感觉
写作课，外教，一个美国大妞
发下作文以后发现满篇的叉子，写了多少年的东西突然被完全推翻了，换一种写作模式重新思考
Rewrite，想了半天Thesis Statement 到底应该怎么写，还是有点晕
下面是我Rewrite的成果，本来想找老师看看，结果没机会...自我感觉比之前写的那个层次高了点，不过看着感觉还是有点幼稚，尤其是第三段显得相当业余，考虑到坛子里英语好的人相当之多，惭愧的放上来，有什么好建议请多指教[s:258]
Why is writing important？
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Recent survey suggests that people are considering writing as both capability and a way of communication.Improving writing skills will make them distinctive since skillful writing can catch people's attention easier.Good writing will bring people more confidence and happiness.
Writing is an essential key to achievement in school, in the workplace, and in the larger world.Research shows that writing develops higher-order thinking abilities and helps people make a good impression on their leaders.Finding a decent job may become easier when they are intelligent to write skillfully.
What's more,writing is a simple way of communication.People exchange ideas in their writings,they can express their opinions better if they write lucidly.Good writing will not only make people understand each other better,but also deepen their friendships.
It is obvious that writing possesses an important position in various ways of life.To be a decent person,people need to improve their writing skills to show their thoughts and intelligence.Skillful writing will make people's lives easier.
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发表于 2008-10-23 22:13:37
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